Monday, August 15, 2016

Fire Sower Preview: Chapter Two

We're getting closer to the release date of my latest book! It will be available for sale on September 1st, so mark your calendars. Until then, enjoy another preview chapter. If you haven't read the first one, click here. Be sure to let me know what you think!











Chapter Two: Journey to Marath




Rest Stone Valley was surrounded by several low mountains, barely taller than hills. It was given its name due to the large stone in the center of the valley that vaguely resembled an enormous bed.

The fertile grasslands of the valley had been claimed by farmers over the generations, until it had been transformed into neatly plowed fields for as far as the eye could see. Occasional trees dotted the landscape, as did the tidy homes of those who cultivated the land. Down the center of the valley was a small river from which numerous irrigation canals spread outward.

A soft breeze swept down from the mountains, bringing the scent of pines with it. Idris took a deep breath and enjoyed the smell of it mixed with scent of freshly overturned earth.

“I doubt there is anywhere as beautiful as our valley,” he said happily.

Cadell smiled at his son’s enthusiasm. “Well, I cannot say I have travelled much, but I would be inclined to agree with you.”

“What is Marath like?” inquired Idris.

“Big,” was the unhelpful reply.

Idris laughed. “And?”

“It is big and noisy and crowded,” Cadell expounded. “There are buildings twice as tall as a house, and the palace is as large as one of our mountains. People there wear clothes made from exotic silks and fine linens, and they ride around in carriages pulled by the finest horses.”

Idris rubbed his hands over his coarse shirt, which had been carefully mended by his mother. How would he look to the rich people described by his father?

Cadell noticed the motion and gave a reassuring smile. “We will only be there for a few hours, and then we will be heading home. The people of Marath are accustomed to seeing visitors from all over the kingdom.”

The road that they walked on began winding towards the west, and Cadell waved to neighbors as they passed them working in their fields. Before long, Idris and his father were joined by another pair of travelers bound for Marath.

Idris tried to hide his dislike as he greeted the boy his own age. “Hello, Meic.”

Meic made no attempt to hide his disdain for Idris, but his father nudged him to reply. “Hello.”

Idris had known Meic his entire life, and had disliked him for nearly as long. They were almost exactly the same age—Idris being one day older—and therefore they were always grouped together during local activities.

Meic did not wear a topknot like the other boys their age, but wore his long black hair in a high ponytail. He did this because that was how warriors were described in the stories they had been told as children, and Meic dreamed of being a warrior as well. He scorned those who were happy with life on a farm and declared that only simpletons chose to stay.

Idris was among the so-called simpletons.

The animosity between the two boys went unnoticed by their fathers. Cadell shook hands with Owen heartily and suggested that they travel together.

“You are not waiting until your birthday to set out?” asked Idris, even though the answer was obvious.

“I will be fifteen by the time we reach Marath,” sneered Meic.

“I know,” said Idris, “but I thought you would want to spend your birthday with your family.”

The other boy sniffed haughtily. “I do not care about that. In a few years’ time, I will not see them anymore.”

“Lucky them,” muttered Idris.

If Meic heard, he chose to ignore the remark. “I am going to get a sword from the Treasury, and when I learn to use it I am going to join the king’s army.”

Idris frowned. “Why not join right away? They have training for people our age, even if you have never used a weapon before.”

Meic looked even more disdainful. “Do you think I want to be grouped in with all of the beginners? No, I intend to join the army when I am ready to be placed ahead of everyone else starting out.”

“Who is going to teach you how to use a sword? It is not as if there are any soldiers in Rest Stone Valley,” Idris pointed out.

His companion waved away this concern. “I will teach myself.”

Idris hid a smile as he thought about the fun that could be had witnessing Meic flailing about with a dangerous weapon. Maybe he would lose a finger and be unable to join the army after all.

At this point, Owen glanced over his shoulder and spoke to his son. “I still think you should get a cow or two pigs. I would be happy to make you a partner in the farm if you were willing to bring something to it.”

Meic’s eyes flashed with anger. “I told you, I am not going to be a farmer.”

Owen shrugged and went back to conversing with Cadell, but Idris thought he glimpsed a hurt expression in the man’s eyes.

“What are you going to choose?” Meic asked, his tone still warm from the confrontation with his father.

Idris tried to sound casual. “I do not know. I thought I would wait to decide until I see what is available.”

Meic was incredulous. “You have not decided?”

“There could be things there that we did not imagine,” said Idris defensively.

“How much imagination do you need to get something for a stupid farm?” Meic shot back.

“If you do not wish to work on the farm,” Cadell said over his shoulder to Idris, “you could get a horse. I am certain that Heilin and Collen would be happy to let you join their business.”

Cadell’s two younger brothers bred and trained horses on a ranch on the other side of the valley.

“I… maybe,” Idris said lamely.

The road they were following began sloping upward, over one of the mountains that protected Rest Stone Valley. Idris had never gone beyond the mountains of their little home, and he looked forward with anticipation to the sight he was soon to see.

The climb was not a difficult one, and the road soon reached the summit. Idris quickened his step and hopped on top of a large rock to the side of the road. Calaris stretched out before his eyes, all the way to the coast.

“I can see the ocean from here,” exclaimed Idris in delight.

Even Meic couldn’t hide his excitement. “Is Marath by the water?”

Owen nodded. “Yes, the western edge of the city is a massive port.”

Idris turned around to take in the entire view. Rest Stone Valley looked peaceful and quiet below, and beyond it lay the rest of the kingdom. Cadell began pointing out different landmarks to his son.

“Just beyond our valley the land turns to fen, all the way to the eastern border of Calaris. Then to the north and south there are grasslands, and that is where you will find all of the cities and villages and farms. Calaris is not a very wide nation, but it is quite long. I once saw a map,” he explained.

They continued walking on the dirt road as it wound downward, away from the mountain. Meic began to pepper his father with questions.

“King Nikolas has to fight to keep invaders out of the Calaris, right? Is he not the first warrior king in three generations? Are we at war with the barbarians to the east? What is their country called? Is it true that King Nikolas encourages all young men to become soldiers?”

Idris could practically see the dreams of glory swirling around Meic’s head.

Owen seemed reluctant to answer his son’s questions. “The country to the east is called Roshum, I believe. It is true that we are often at war with them…”

“Then it is our duty to join the king’s army and fight,” Meic said with satisfaction.

Cadell raised a finger. “Ah, but if we all were soldiers, who would grow the food to feed the kingdom? Even King Nikolas the Bold cannot create grain out of thin air.”

Meic was silenced by his words, and Idris grinned at his father. He knew that Cadell took great pride in his farm, and he often spoke of how it was the greatest occupation a man could have. Idris also loved the farm, but he felt strange when he thought about working there for the rest of his life.

The four kept a good pace throughout the day, stopping only briefly for a quick meal at midday. By the time the sun was beginning to set, they had reached an area just off the road that had been cleared of any plants or rocks. A blackened fire pit sat in the center, and it was apparent that the site was often used by travelers.

Idris and Meic began gathering sticks from the ground surrounding a nearby tree, and soon a small fire was burning in the pit. Cadell and Owen combined supplies, and before long they had a pot full of stew to go around and a loaf of bread to sop up the gravy.

The conversation naturally turned back to their destination, and Meic and Owen got into a heated discussion about Meic’s desire to join the army.

Cadell and Idris gave them a bit of privacy and settled down to talk on their own.

“So,” Idris’s father started, “you have not decided what you want from the Treasury?”

Idris had been reluctant to discuss it with others, but it felt natural to confide in his father. “I have been thinking about it a lot, but I can never seem to settle on anything. Every idea that I come up with just does not seem right for me.”

Cadell’s brow furrowed thoughtfully. “Do you want to join the army, like Meic?”

Idris shook his head. “No, I love the farm. But when I think about getting cows or pigs it just feels… wrong.”

“Well, there are lots of options,” his father said encouragingly. “You could get some gold and buy some land, or the blacksmith is looking for an apprentice. When I was your age I decided to get gold because I was not sure what I wanted either.”

Idris had never known this about his father. “Really?”

Cadell nodded. “Really. My brothers already had plans for breeding horses, and so your grandfather said that the farm would be mine. I did not know what I would need to help the farm along, so I just got some gold from the Treasury. I figured I could always decide later.”

“Maybe I should do the same,” said Idris doubtfully. Even that didn’t feel right.

Cadell fixed his solemn gaze on his son. “If you do, just remember that it will have to be paid back someday. It is tempting to take a large amount of gold, but if you cannot earn it back during your lifetime then you leave your family in debt when you die. Remember: we are only farmers, not lords.”

Idris considered his father’s words as he rolled up in his blanket for the night. He could not understand why it was so hard for him to decide, especially since he knew that he wanted to stay in Rest Stone Valley. He did not have dreams of adventures or glory. He just wanted to stay near his family and settle down. Maybe find a girl to marry…

It seemed that he had only just drifted off to sleep when he was being shaken awake again.

“Wake up, my boy. Time for us to get going.”

They had a cold breakfast of bread and dried fruit, packing up their camp as they ate. Owen pulled out a sweet bun for Meic, declaring it to be a birthday treat. Meic ate it with relish, looking at Idris as if expecting him to be jealous.

Idris smiled blandly and said, “Happy birthday, Meic.”

The weather was as fair as the previous day, and Idris had an enjoyable time walking along the dirt road. A slight breeze rustled through the tall grass on the sides, and soon the small road merged with a larger one that was paved with cobblestones.

Traffic on the new road was heavier, since there were many who had business in the capital of Calaris. There were wagon trains with various goods, patrolling soldiers in charge of keeping the peace, petitioners, and several other duos that looked to be parents escorting their fifteen-year-old children to the Treasury.

It took them half a day to reach the gates of Marath, but they could see the city looming in the distance long before they arrived.

Marath looked just like the cities described in the old war stories, with a wall that was made of thick stone and stood three times the height of a man. Each of the city gates were made of giant logs that had been reinforced with bars of steel, and archers were positioned along the top of the wall at regular intervals.

The four travelers joined in the line of other visitors to the city to be questioned by the guards at the gate.

“What are your names?” The guard who asked the question was wearing a green tunic that bore the sigil of the city—a tower guarded by a dragon.

“Cadell and Idris of Rest Stone Valley,” Cadell answered.

“What is your business in Marath?” the soldier questioned, jotting down a note in an enormous ledger.

“My son is now fifteen years of age. We are here to visit the Treasury.”

The soldier nodded, making another note. “How long will you be in the city?”

“One day.”

“When you leave Marath you will be required to pass through this same gate so we can verify your information,” droned the guard, waving them past. “Thank you, move along.”

Idris thought briefly about whispering to Meic that his future as a soldier would probably be the same as the guard’s, but the jibe was driven from his mind as he entered the city.

The noise of a thousand voices talking all at once broke over Idris’s senses. The gate opened up to a square that was filled with all sorts of people. Some were greeting visitors they had been expecting, some were watching a group of street performers, some had small handcarts from which they were selling food or trinkets, some were simply standing around chatting. In the center of the square was a statue of a man holding a broadsword. He had a thick beard and he was portrayed wearing elaborate robes.

“King Nikolas,” said Cadell, gesturing to the statue.

Idris studied the statue with renewed interest. He had never seen the king before, nor a likeness of him. The statue certainly gave the man the look of a warrior, and Idris wondered if the same was true in real life.

At this point they were joined by Owen and Meic. The two of them looked just as unnerved by the chaos of the city as Idris felt.

“Shall we go on?” suggested Owen, his voice rather strained.

He pointed towards the center of the city where, even over the tops of the tall buildings, the spires of the royal palace could be seen. That was where the royal family lived, along with the higher nobility and those that served them.

Cadell gave Idris’s shoulder a reassuring squeeze. “The Treasury awaits.”






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Thursday, August 4, 2016

Fire Sower Preview: Chapter One

As always, I thought I'd give you all a sneak peek leading up to the release of my next book "Fire Sower." Keep in mind, this is a rough draft version (since I haven't gotten back the notes from my editor yet). But I hope that you enjoy it all the same. Let me know what you think!





Chapter One: Idris




The first time Idris heard about the Treasury he was five years old. His favorite cow was being led away by his father, and he had asked his mother why.

“Do you remember that Grandpa died last summer?” she asked kindly.

Idris nodded his small head.

“Now that a year has passed, it is time for us to pay his death tax.”

His mother’s words were a mystery to the small boy.

“What is a death tax?” he inquired.

His mother sat down on the stool that she used while churning butter and she set him on her knee, just as she always did when she was about to explain something to him.

“Idris, do you know that we have a king?”

Idris nodded with enthusiasm. He had been told of their great and generous king, Nikolas the Bold. The king had won the war with the barbarians to the east, and because of his bravery Idris and his family remained safe.

“Our land is called Calaris, and we have always been ruled by wonderful kings and queens,” his mother continued. “A very long time ago, one of the kings looked at his vast treasury and decided that it was more than he could ever need. He loved his people, and he decided that all of the riches of the kingdom should belong to them, too.”

Idris looked around with wide eyes, expecting to see piles of gold hiding among the haystacks of his father’s field. “Where is it?”

His mother laughed merrily. “It is still in the Treasury, but when each child turns fifteen years old they are allowed to go and choose something to keep.”

Idris’s eyes grew even wider. “Anything?”

“Well, anything in the Treasury,” she explained. “I got a beautiful necklace of sapphires that I wore at my wedding. Your father got a pouch of gold with which he built our house and the new barn. Your grandpa got a beautiful milk cow, and that was the beginning of this farm. Now that Grandpa has died, though, we must repay what was taken back to the Treasury. That is called a death tax.”

“That was not Grandpa’s cow,” argued little Idris. “That was our cow!”

His mother smiled gently. “The cow that Grandpa received from the Treasury is long dead. Everything we have on this farm is because of what Grandpa did with that one cow, and so we wanted to give our very best cow back to the Treasury.”

She looked at the horizon with a thoughtful expression on her face, and there was a wistful tone to her voice that Idris was too young to understand.

“My necklace will be returned to the Treasury when I die, because we have nothing of equal value to give in exchange. With something like livestock or the coins that your father received, we just need to give the same type of thing back to the Treasury.”

A fierce frown spread across Idris’s small face. “Do you mean that my cow will not come back?”

“No, my darling.”

Tears welled up in his brown eyes and his voice rose with childish anger. “I love my cow! I want her back!”

His mother enfolded him in her warm embrace. “I am sorry, Idris. I know you love that cow, but it belongs to the Treasury now. We must give back what we received, otherwise there would be nothing left. If we did not give our very best, then we would be taking away from the boys and girls who will be going to the Treasury this year.”

Idris’s small shoulders shook with his sobs, and he sniffed as he spoke. “When I get big, I am going to get my cow back. I will get her from the Treasury.”

She smiled down in understanding. “We shall see.”



***



The bright sun filtered through the dusty window into Idris’s bedroom. He muttered sleepily and turned over on his side, away from the light on his face.

Incoherent thoughts of confusion drifted across his mind, and then he bolted upright in his bed.

If the sun was up, that meant he was very late in beginning his chores.

Why hadn’t his father called him?

Idris scrambled off of his cot and pulled on his clothes. It took him a moment to realize that his best clothes had been laid out instead of his usual work clothing, and he stared at the carefully cleaned trousers in bewilderment.

A soft knock sounded at his door and his mother stuck in her head.

“Oh, you are already awake,” she commented.

Idris began to stammer an apology. “Mother, I did not mean to sleep in…”

“Sleep in?” she repeated. “Idris, dear, you are not doing chores today.”

“I am not…?”

A wide smile spread across her face. “Idris, have you forgotten what today is?”

The last bits of sleep faded from his brain and his thoughts cleared. He returned his mother’s smile sheepishly. “It is my birthday.”

She leaned forward and gave him a quick kiss on the cheek. “Happy birthday, my darling.”

Idris waited until his mother left the room and then he hurried to finish getting ready. It was his fifteenth birthday, and that meant that he would be travelling with his father to Marath, the city of King Nikolas.

He brushed his long black hair and twisted it up into a topknot, as was common with the farmers of the area. Then he walked out of the bedroom and climbed down the ladder that led to the main room of the house.

His mother was baking bread, and two of his younger sisters were helping to knead the dough. Elain and Dafina both looked up when he walked towards them and chorused, “Happy birthday, Idris!”

He grinned in return. “Thank you.”

“I saved you some breakfast,” his mother said, pointing to a covered plate on a shelf.

“Deri tried to eat it,” Dafina added, eager to report on the wrongdoings of her twin brother. “He said he needed it more since he was doing chores and you were not.”

“Yes, well, he ate plenty even without it,” said their mother, not looking up from her task.

The fare was simple, as it always was. It consisted of a bowl of hot cereal made from roughly cut grain, three boiled eggs, and some bread topped with marmalade. Idris sat down at the table and chatted with his mother and sisters while he ate.

“Where is Adwen?” he asked.

His mother dusted the bread dough with more flour and continued kneading. “She is out gathering eggs.”

Idris was the eldest of seven children, and Adwen was the youngest. She had always been rather pampered, and pouted whenever she was given chores. Idris was glad that she was being given more work to do, though. After all, she was seven years old, and when Idris was that age he had been doing chores for half of his life.

As if on cue, Adwen flounced into the kitchen looking sulky and carrying a basket full of eggs. Her long black hair was plaited into two braids just like her older sisters, but her clothes looked less worn and her hands didn’t bear the calluses of hard work.

“Is this enough?” she demanded plaintively.

Their mother didn’t even glance at the basket. “Did you get them all?”

“How am I to know where they all are?” whined Adwen.

“The henhouse is not big, dearest,” said their mother patiently. “Just be sure to look everywhere.”

Adwen scowled. “Make Idris do it. He is just sitting there.”

“Idris will be leaving shortly with your father.”

With a huff of displeasure, the small girl stomped out of the house and back to the yard. The older children exchanged smiles, but said nothing about it.

“What do you think you will pick from the Treasury?” asked Elain.

She was two years younger than Idris, but already she was trying to decide what she would choose when her turn came. She talked about it at length with anyone who was willing to listen.

Idris’s brow furrowed and he felt a familiar weight in his chest. He had been giving it a lot of thought over the last month, but he was no closer to a decision. “I am not sure,” he said slowly.

“I am going to get a beautiful necklace like Mother’s,” declared Dafina.

Their mother shook her head. “Oh no, darling. Do not waste the opportunity like that.”

Her children stared at her in surprise.

“What do you mean?” asked Elain.

There was a moment of silence while they waited for her to speak. When she did so, it sounded as though she was choosing her words with care.

“I was very vain when I was young. I had often been told I was the most beautiful girl in Rest Stone Valley, and I believed it to be true. I hated that my family was poor, though. I wanted beautiful things like dresses and jewelry, and I wanted to go to fancy parties and dances.”

Dafina’s expression became dreamy and she nodded with enthusiasm.

Their mother went on. “When it came time for me to go to the Treasury, I knew I wanted to pick out something beautiful to wear. That sapphire necklace was exactly what I had dreamed of having, and I chose it without hesitation.”

Elain was watching their mother’s face and said shrewdly, “But you regret it.”

“I have only worn that necklace a handful of times since it became mine,” she said in a practical tone. “It is not something to wear while milking cows.”

Idris and his sisters laughed at their mother’s comment, but she went on seriously.

“I could never sell it, because we would never be able to earn back enough money to repay the Treasury. All I can do is keep it safe until I die, and then it will go back from whence it came. I could have chosen something that would have been a benefit for the rest of my life, but instead I chose a few moments of vain glory.”

She reached over and placed her floury hand over her eldest son’s. “Do not make the same mistake that I did.”

“I will not,” he assured her.

Her smile became more lively as she said to Dafina, “If you wish to have something beautiful to wear, you may borrow my necklace. You do not need to get one of your own.”

“Can I wear it next week?” Dafina asked eagerly.

Elain snorted. “To the barn-raising for Selyf? That does not seem the time to wear priceless jewels.”

Dafina looked crestfallen, and their mother put her arm around her shoulders.

“Not next week, but perhaps for your first valley-wide dance.”

The glow returned to the girl’s eyes, and she resumed kneading bread dough with vigor.

“Prydwen,” shouted a deep voice from outside the house. “Prydwen, is that lazy boy up yet? It is time to go.”

Idris grinned at his mother and went to answer his father personally. He walked to the open door and began to pull on his boots. “I am ready, Father.”

Idris looked almost exactly as his father had at the same age. He was tall and slender, with hardened muscles and rough hands from working on a farm. His skin was the color of cinnamon, and that was only partially due to the days spent in the sun. His father shared all these traits, only maturity had given him a broader figure. Not a single grey hair marred his father’s black topknot, and it would be easy to mistake the two as brothers instead of father and son.

Idris took the pack that was handed to him by his father and slung it over his back. Between the two of them, they carried enough supplies to easily make the journey to Marath and home again.

Idris’s mother and sisters appeared at the door to wave farewell, and Prydwen kissed her husband and son with tears in her eyes.

“Now, now,” scolded Idris’s father gently. “There is no need for tears. We will be back in a few days.”

She nodded as she embraced her firstborn. “I know, but I just cannot believe that my baby has grown up so quickly.”

Idris patted his mother awkwardly on the shoulder, and looked to his father for some clue as to how to respond.

His father simply smiled and shrugged.

“Well, hurry along,” urged Prydwen, as if they were dawdling. “You have a long way to go before dark.”

There was another slight delay when Adwen came running out of the henhouse.

“Papa, take me with you!”

Their father chuckled indulgently and swept the child into his arms. “You know I cannot, poppet. Your mama needs you here with her.”

“Only to sweep floors and gather eggs,” Adwen answered darkly.

“Such important tasks would never be entrusted to me,” said their father with mock solemnity.

“I never get to do anything fun,” wailed the girl.

Prydwen took Adwen from her father’s arms and said, “You will have plenty of fun when you get older. Cadell, you really must get going.”

Idris’s father nodded and raised a rough hand in farewell. Idris did the same and turned to follow his father down the dusty dirt road.

The path led them past their fields, where Osian, Deri, and Rolant were busy at work with their uncle and cousins. Idris waved to his brothers, who paused from their labors to watch him leaving the farm.

“Safe journey, Cadell, Idris,” called his uncle, Tegryn.

Tegryn was married to Idris’s father’s sister, and they ran the farm together. Tegryn had brought land to the partnership and Cadell had brought livestock. Together they had one of the most prosperous farms in Rest Stone Valley. Idris was proud to be a part of such a family.

Cadell clapped a hand on Idris’s shoulder and looked at his son with pride in his eyes. “Are you ready for your first adventure as a man?”

Idris tried to seem confident and excited, but deep down he was wondering that very same thing.










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Monday, July 25, 2016

Fire Sower Cover Art

Are you as excited as I am? The cover art for my upcoming book is finally finished! It's everything I hoped for and more. It was great working with Dustin Foran, and I would highly recommend him to anyone. His prices are great and his talent is vast. You can find his work at: http://cgbeat.com/dustbot3000 and http://dustbot3000.tumblr.com/



And now, for the main event!
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Monday, May 16, 2016

Book Review: BURNING GLASS by Kathryn Purdie


Amazon link:
http://www.amazon.com/Burning-Glass-Kathryn-Purdie/dp/0062412361/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1463424188&sr=8-1&keywords=burning+glass

Amazon description:
Red Queen meets Shadow and Bone in a debut fantasy about a girl forced to use her gift for sensing—and absorbing—other people’s feelings to protect the empire from assassins. Steeped in intrigue and betrayal, Burning Glass captivates with heartrending romance, dangerous magic, and one girl’s quest for redemption. 
In Riaznin, it’s considered an honor for Auraseers like Sonya—girls with a rare form of synesthesia—to serve as the emperor’s personal protector, constantly scanning for feelings of malice and bloodlust in the court. But Sonya would rather be free.
After the queen’s murder and a tragic accident, Sonya is hauled off to the palace to guard a charming yet volatile new ruler. But Sonya’s power is reckless and hard to control. She’s often carried away by the intense passion of others.
And when a growing rebellion forces Sonya to side with either the emperor who trusts her or his mysterious brother, the crown prince, Sonya realizes she may be the key to saving the empire—or its greatest threat.

My review:
4 out of 5 stars--I really liked it and would definitely read it again

I'm not entirely sure what I expected as I began this book, but I really enjoyed it. It is exceptionally written, and it paints a vivid picture of Sonya's world. From a purely technical aspect, it is refreshing to read a book that is written with such skill and finesse. And the story itself was different than other stories I have read in the past.

Sonya as a character is deeply sympathetic. Her constant exposure to emotion--both her own and that of others--make her more vulnerable than most characters. The fact that she is an Auraseer brings every emotion of every character to the forefront of the story, and it is almost draining to read at first. That sounds like a bad thing, but it isn't. Kathryn Purdie's ability to draw in a reader to the story and create empathy with the characters is extraordinary. I found myself feeling what Sonya felt, and there were times I had to set the book aside and settle my own emotions before continuing. As I progressed in the story, it became easier for me to process what I was reading, but it definitely caught me off guard at first.

The supporting characters are well-balanced, in that they are flawed but not overly so. Even the characters that are dislikeable have moments where you can really understand why they are acting the way that they are. The setting of the story is beautiful and raw, filled with the day-to-day details that I so enjoy in a book (such as foods and customs and quirks of culture). There are enough connections between our world and Sonya's world that it feels familiar, but nothing to make it feel out of place (such as modern slang in the dialogue, which is a pet peeve of mine). 

One of the things that I appreciated the most was Kathryn Purdie's ability to convey tense situations without dragging her story through the mud. I strongly believe that you can write a good story without the gratuitous or graphic use of sex or violence or language, and "Burning Glass" proves that point. There are parts in the story that are passionate and there are parts of the story that are dark and disturbing, but I never had the thought that something was unnecessary or in poor taste. For this reason, I feel that this book truly is YA fiction. I would have no problem recommending "Burning Glass" to the teenagers of my family, which is more than what I can say for a lot of books that call themselves YA.

All of this being said, I do have a critique. I felt the ending was rather abrupt and the resolutions a bit forced. I assumed that the conflicts of the book would be carried into the sequel, but that doesn't appear to be the case. Everything was wrapped up, so that the book could stand on its own if you didn't wish to read any more. And while I appreciate stand-alone books (even though I'm aware that this book is the first of a trilogy), it was still a bit jarring to come to the end.

All in all, I feel "Burning Glass" was an exceptional book and I look forward to more from Kathryn Purdie.

Thursday, January 28, 2016

Personal Announcement

I am pleased to announce the birth of my third child and second son! "Lewis" and "Eliza" are so excited to have a little brother, and my husband and I are so happy that he arrived safely.

As expected, this will slow down my writing a bit. I was hoping to have my new story done by this summer, but that probably won't happen. I'm still hoping to have it done this year, though. We will have to see how everything works out. I might be able to get some writing done during those late night feedings.

I'll try to keep you all updated on how the book is coming along. Be sure to check on my Facebook page as well for news on what I'm up to!

Wednesday, November 25, 2015

BLACK FRIDAY PROMOTION

Hello again!

'Tis the season for sales, yes? So I have set up a promotion where all three of my books will be available for free this Friday (November 27)! This is the first time I have had my last two books available for free, so don't miss out on the opportunity. And, please, help me to spread the word. Tell your friends and family to take a minute on Friday to download my trilogy. It's FREE! What do they have to lose?

Happy Thanksgiving to all of you!