Thursday, August 4, 2016

Fire Sower Preview: Chapter One

As always, I thought I'd give you all a sneak peek leading up to the release of my next book "Fire Sower." Keep in mind, this is a rough draft version (since I haven't gotten back the notes from my editor yet). But I hope that you enjoy it all the same. Let me know what you think!





Chapter One: Idris




The first time Idris heard about the Treasury he was five years old. His favorite cow was being led away by his father, and he had asked his mother why.

“Do you remember that Grandpa died last summer?” she asked kindly.

Idris nodded his small head.

“Now that a year has passed, it is time for us to pay his death tax.”

His mother’s words were a mystery to the small boy.

“What is a death tax?” he inquired.

His mother sat down on the stool that she used while churning butter and she set him on her knee, just as she always did when she was about to explain something to him.

“Idris, do you know that we have a king?”

Idris nodded with enthusiasm. He had been told of their great and generous king, Nikolas the Bold. The king had won the war with the barbarians to the east, and because of his bravery Idris and his family remained safe.

“Our land is called Calaris, and we have always been ruled by wonderful kings and queens,” his mother continued. “A very long time ago, one of the kings looked at his vast treasury and decided that it was more than he could ever need. He loved his people, and he decided that all of the riches of the kingdom should belong to them, too.”

Idris looked around with wide eyes, expecting to see piles of gold hiding among the haystacks of his father’s field. “Where is it?”

His mother laughed merrily. “It is still in the Treasury, but when each child turns fifteen years old they are allowed to go and choose something to keep.”

Idris’s eyes grew even wider. “Anything?”

“Well, anything in the Treasury,” she explained. “I got a beautiful necklace of sapphires that I wore at my wedding. Your father got a pouch of gold with which he built our house and the new barn. Your grandpa got a beautiful milk cow, and that was the beginning of this farm. Now that Grandpa has died, though, we must repay what was taken back to the Treasury. That is called a death tax.”

“That was not Grandpa’s cow,” argued little Idris. “That was our cow!”

His mother smiled gently. “The cow that Grandpa received from the Treasury is long dead. Everything we have on this farm is because of what Grandpa did with that one cow, and so we wanted to give our very best cow back to the Treasury.”

She looked at the horizon with a thoughtful expression on her face, and there was a wistful tone to her voice that Idris was too young to understand.

“My necklace will be returned to the Treasury when I die, because we have nothing of equal value to give in exchange. With something like livestock or the coins that your father received, we just need to give the same type of thing back to the Treasury.”

A fierce frown spread across Idris’s small face. “Do you mean that my cow will not come back?”

“No, my darling.”

Tears welled up in his brown eyes and his voice rose with childish anger. “I love my cow! I want her back!”

His mother enfolded him in her warm embrace. “I am sorry, Idris. I know you love that cow, but it belongs to the Treasury now. We must give back what we received, otherwise there would be nothing left. If we did not give our very best, then we would be taking away from the boys and girls who will be going to the Treasury this year.”

Idris’s small shoulders shook with his sobs, and he sniffed as he spoke. “When I get big, I am going to get my cow back. I will get her from the Treasury.”

She smiled down in understanding. “We shall see.”



***



The bright sun filtered through the dusty window into Idris’s bedroom. He muttered sleepily and turned over on his side, away from the light on his face.

Incoherent thoughts of confusion drifted across his mind, and then he bolted upright in his bed.

If the sun was up, that meant he was very late in beginning his chores.

Why hadn’t his father called him?

Idris scrambled off of his cot and pulled on his clothes. It took him a moment to realize that his best clothes had been laid out instead of his usual work clothing, and he stared at the carefully cleaned trousers in bewilderment.

A soft knock sounded at his door and his mother stuck in her head.

“Oh, you are already awake,” she commented.

Idris began to stammer an apology. “Mother, I did not mean to sleep in…”

“Sleep in?” she repeated. “Idris, dear, you are not doing chores today.”

“I am not…?”

A wide smile spread across her face. “Idris, have you forgotten what today is?”

The last bits of sleep faded from his brain and his thoughts cleared. He returned his mother’s smile sheepishly. “It is my birthday.”

She leaned forward and gave him a quick kiss on the cheek. “Happy birthday, my darling.”

Idris waited until his mother left the room and then he hurried to finish getting ready. It was his fifteenth birthday, and that meant that he would be travelling with his father to Marath, the city of King Nikolas.

He brushed his long black hair and twisted it up into a topknot, as was common with the farmers of the area. Then he walked out of the bedroom and climbed down the ladder that led to the main room of the house.

His mother was baking bread, and two of his younger sisters were helping to knead the dough. Elain and Dafina both looked up when he walked towards them and chorused, “Happy birthday, Idris!”

He grinned in return. “Thank you.”

“I saved you some breakfast,” his mother said, pointing to a covered plate on a shelf.

“Deri tried to eat it,” Dafina added, eager to report on the wrongdoings of her twin brother. “He said he needed it more since he was doing chores and you were not.”

“Yes, well, he ate plenty even without it,” said their mother, not looking up from her task.

The fare was simple, as it always was. It consisted of a bowl of hot cereal made from roughly cut grain, three boiled eggs, and some bread topped with marmalade. Idris sat down at the table and chatted with his mother and sisters while he ate.

“Where is Adwen?” he asked.

His mother dusted the bread dough with more flour and continued kneading. “She is out gathering eggs.”

Idris was the eldest of seven children, and Adwen was the youngest. She had always been rather pampered, and pouted whenever she was given chores. Idris was glad that she was being given more work to do, though. After all, she was seven years old, and when Idris was that age he had been doing chores for half of his life.

As if on cue, Adwen flounced into the kitchen looking sulky and carrying a basket full of eggs. Her long black hair was plaited into two braids just like her older sisters, but her clothes looked less worn and her hands didn’t bear the calluses of hard work.

“Is this enough?” she demanded plaintively.

Their mother didn’t even glance at the basket. “Did you get them all?”

“How am I to know where they all are?” whined Adwen.

“The henhouse is not big, dearest,” said their mother patiently. “Just be sure to look everywhere.”

Adwen scowled. “Make Idris do it. He is just sitting there.”

“Idris will be leaving shortly with your father.”

With a huff of displeasure, the small girl stomped out of the house and back to the yard. The older children exchanged smiles, but said nothing about it.

“What do you think you will pick from the Treasury?” asked Elain.

She was two years younger than Idris, but already she was trying to decide what she would choose when her turn came. She talked about it at length with anyone who was willing to listen.

Idris’s brow furrowed and he felt a familiar weight in his chest. He had been giving it a lot of thought over the last month, but he was no closer to a decision. “I am not sure,” he said slowly.

“I am going to get a beautiful necklace like Mother’s,” declared Dafina.

Their mother shook her head. “Oh no, darling. Do not waste the opportunity like that.”

Her children stared at her in surprise.

“What do you mean?” asked Elain.

There was a moment of silence while they waited for her to speak. When she did so, it sounded as though she was choosing her words with care.

“I was very vain when I was young. I had often been told I was the most beautiful girl in Rest Stone Valley, and I believed it to be true. I hated that my family was poor, though. I wanted beautiful things like dresses and jewelry, and I wanted to go to fancy parties and dances.”

Dafina’s expression became dreamy and she nodded with enthusiasm.

Their mother went on. “When it came time for me to go to the Treasury, I knew I wanted to pick out something beautiful to wear. That sapphire necklace was exactly what I had dreamed of having, and I chose it without hesitation.”

Elain was watching their mother’s face and said shrewdly, “But you regret it.”

“I have only worn that necklace a handful of times since it became mine,” she said in a practical tone. “It is not something to wear while milking cows.”

Idris and his sisters laughed at their mother’s comment, but she went on seriously.

“I could never sell it, because we would never be able to earn back enough money to repay the Treasury. All I can do is keep it safe until I die, and then it will go back from whence it came. I could have chosen something that would have been a benefit for the rest of my life, but instead I chose a few moments of vain glory.”

She reached over and placed her floury hand over her eldest son’s. “Do not make the same mistake that I did.”

“I will not,” he assured her.

Her smile became more lively as she said to Dafina, “If you wish to have something beautiful to wear, you may borrow my necklace. You do not need to get one of your own.”

“Can I wear it next week?” Dafina asked eagerly.

Elain snorted. “To the barn-raising for Selyf? That does not seem the time to wear priceless jewels.”

Dafina looked crestfallen, and their mother put her arm around her shoulders.

“Not next week, but perhaps for your first valley-wide dance.”

The glow returned to the girl’s eyes, and she resumed kneading bread dough with vigor.

“Prydwen,” shouted a deep voice from outside the house. “Prydwen, is that lazy boy up yet? It is time to go.”

Idris grinned at his mother and went to answer his father personally. He walked to the open door and began to pull on his boots. “I am ready, Father.”

Idris looked almost exactly as his father had at the same age. He was tall and slender, with hardened muscles and rough hands from working on a farm. His skin was the color of cinnamon, and that was only partially due to the days spent in the sun. His father shared all these traits, only maturity had given him a broader figure. Not a single grey hair marred his father’s black topknot, and it would be easy to mistake the two as brothers instead of father and son.

Idris took the pack that was handed to him by his father and slung it over his back. Between the two of them, they carried enough supplies to easily make the journey to Marath and home again.

Idris’s mother and sisters appeared at the door to wave farewell, and Prydwen kissed her husband and son with tears in her eyes.

“Now, now,” scolded Idris’s father gently. “There is no need for tears. We will be back in a few days.”

She nodded as she embraced her firstborn. “I know, but I just cannot believe that my baby has grown up so quickly.”

Idris patted his mother awkwardly on the shoulder, and looked to his father for some clue as to how to respond.

His father simply smiled and shrugged.

“Well, hurry along,” urged Prydwen, as if they were dawdling. “You have a long way to go before dark.”

There was another slight delay when Adwen came running out of the henhouse.

“Papa, take me with you!”

Their father chuckled indulgently and swept the child into his arms. “You know I cannot, poppet. Your mama needs you here with her.”

“Only to sweep floors and gather eggs,” Adwen answered darkly.

“Such important tasks would never be entrusted to me,” said their father with mock solemnity.

“I never get to do anything fun,” wailed the girl.

Prydwen took Adwen from her father’s arms and said, “You will have plenty of fun when you get older. Cadell, you really must get going.”

Idris’s father nodded and raised a rough hand in farewell. Idris did the same and turned to follow his father down the dusty dirt road.

The path led them past their fields, where Osian, Deri, and Rolant were busy at work with their uncle and cousins. Idris waved to his brothers, who paused from their labors to watch him leaving the farm.

“Safe journey, Cadell, Idris,” called his uncle, Tegryn.

Tegryn was married to Idris’s father’s sister, and they ran the farm together. Tegryn had brought land to the partnership and Cadell had brought livestock. Together they had one of the most prosperous farms in Rest Stone Valley. Idris was proud to be a part of such a family.

Cadell clapped a hand on Idris’s shoulder and looked at his son with pride in his eyes. “Are you ready for your first adventure as a man?”

Idris tried to seem confident and excited, but deep down he was wondering that very same thing.










To read the next chapter, click here.

Monday, July 25, 2016

Fire Sower Cover Art

Are you as excited as I am? The cover art for my upcoming book is finally finished! It's everything I hoped for and more. It was great working with Dustin Foran, and I would highly recommend him to anyone. His prices are great and his talent is vast. You can find his work at: http://cgbeat.com/dustbot3000 and http://dustbot3000.tumblr.com/



And now, for the main event!
Drumroll, please...







Monday, May 16, 2016

Book Review: BURNING GLASS by Kathryn Purdie


Amazon link:
http://www.amazon.com/Burning-Glass-Kathryn-Purdie/dp/0062412361/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1463424188&sr=8-1&keywords=burning+glass

Amazon description:
Red Queen meets Shadow and Bone in a debut fantasy about a girl forced to use her gift for sensing—and absorbing—other people’s feelings to protect the empire from assassins. Steeped in intrigue and betrayal, Burning Glass captivates with heartrending romance, dangerous magic, and one girl’s quest for redemption. 
In Riaznin, it’s considered an honor for Auraseers like Sonya—girls with a rare form of synesthesia—to serve as the emperor’s personal protector, constantly scanning for feelings of malice and bloodlust in the court. But Sonya would rather be free.
After the queen’s murder and a tragic accident, Sonya is hauled off to the palace to guard a charming yet volatile new ruler. But Sonya’s power is reckless and hard to control. She’s often carried away by the intense passion of others.
And when a growing rebellion forces Sonya to side with either the emperor who trusts her or his mysterious brother, the crown prince, Sonya realizes she may be the key to saving the empire—or its greatest threat.

My review:
4 out of 5 stars--I really liked it and would definitely read it again

I'm not entirely sure what I expected as I began this book, but I really enjoyed it. It is exceptionally written, and it paints a vivid picture of Sonya's world. From a purely technical aspect, it is refreshing to read a book that is written with such skill and finesse. And the story itself was different than other stories I have read in the past.

Sonya as a character is deeply sympathetic. Her constant exposure to emotion--both her own and that of others--make her more vulnerable than most characters. The fact that she is an Auraseer brings every emotion of every character to the forefront of the story, and it is almost draining to read at first. That sounds like a bad thing, but it isn't. Kathryn Purdie's ability to draw in a reader to the story and create empathy with the characters is extraordinary. I found myself feeling what Sonya felt, and there were times I had to set the book aside and settle my own emotions before continuing. As I progressed in the story, it became easier for me to process what I was reading, but it definitely caught me off guard at first.

The supporting characters are well-balanced, in that they are flawed but not overly so. Even the characters that are dislikeable have moments where you can really understand why they are acting the way that they are. The setting of the story is beautiful and raw, filled with the day-to-day details that I so enjoy in a book (such as foods and customs and quirks of culture). There are enough connections between our world and Sonya's world that it feels familiar, but nothing to make it feel out of place (such as modern slang in the dialogue, which is a pet peeve of mine). 

One of the things that I appreciated the most was Kathryn Purdie's ability to convey tense situations without dragging her story through the mud. I strongly believe that you can write a good story without the gratuitous or graphic use of sex or violence or language, and "Burning Glass" proves that point. There are parts in the story that are passionate and there are parts of the story that are dark and disturbing, but I never had the thought that something was unnecessary or in poor taste. For this reason, I feel that this book truly is YA fiction. I would have no problem recommending "Burning Glass" to the teenagers of my family, which is more than what I can say for a lot of books that call themselves YA.

All of this being said, I do have a critique. I felt the ending was rather abrupt and the resolutions a bit forced. I assumed that the conflicts of the book would be carried into the sequel, but that doesn't appear to be the case. Everything was wrapped up, so that the book could stand on its own if you didn't wish to read any more. And while I appreciate stand-alone books (even though I'm aware that this book is the first of a trilogy), it was still a bit jarring to come to the end.

All in all, I feel "Burning Glass" was an exceptional book and I look forward to more from Kathryn Purdie.

Thursday, January 28, 2016

Personal Announcement

I am pleased to announce the birth of my third child and second son! "Lewis" and "Eliza" are so excited to have a little brother, and my husband and I are so happy that he arrived safely.

As expected, this will slow down my writing a bit. I was hoping to have my new story done by this summer, but that probably won't happen. I'm still hoping to have it done this year, though. We will have to see how everything works out. I might be able to get some writing done during those late night feedings.

I'll try to keep you all updated on how the book is coming along. Be sure to check on my Facebook page as well for news on what I'm up to!

Wednesday, November 25, 2015

BLACK FRIDAY PROMOTION

Hello again!

'Tis the season for sales, yes? So I have set up a promotion where all three of my books will be available for free this Friday (November 27)! This is the first time I have had my last two books available for free, so don't miss out on the opportunity. And, please, help me to spread the word. Tell your friends and family to take a minute on Friday to download my trilogy. It's FREE! What do they have to lose?

Happy Thanksgiving to all of you!

Monday, September 28, 2015

Good News/Bad News

Hello, my dear readers!

I know you haven't heard from me in a while, but that is because I've been working on my latest project. I'm excited about where the story is going, and I'm having a lot of fun writing it. New projects are always fun because nothing is decided yet. You get to build your world from scratch, and it leaves so much open to possibility.

I do have some news to share with you, though. You may consider it good news or bad news, depending on how you look at it.

I am expecting my third baby! We are all very excited about this new addition to our family, and we have found out that it will be a brother for "Lewis" and "Eliza" to play with. The baby will be coming with the new year.

While this is happy news, there is some bad news that comes with it.

A new baby means that there will be a delay in the release of my current project. I'm not sure how much of a delay, because I'm hoping to get as much done as possible before he is born. I was aiming for a summer release, but we will have to see how that goes. It may be fall or even winter before I can get it done.

I'll keep you all updated as I go, and I hope that you'll be patient with me throughout the process. Thank you again for all of your support! I honestly couldn't do any of this without such wonderful readers.

Tuesday, August 25, 2015

Q&A With My Readers

I thought it would be fun to do a little Q&A with my readers, and I asked that you send in any questions you might have. I hope that you enjoy reading over the answers I have for you!


When did you decide you wanted to be a writer?
 I loved writing from a very young age, and even before I could write I loved to tell stories that I had made up. My mom wrote a series of children's books, and I'm sure that was an influence on me as a child. It wasn't until I was in high school that I considered it as a profession, though. It was around that time that I came up with the idea for "The Threshold Child" and I began to work on my writing in earnest.

Did you always plan for "The Threshold Child" to be a trilogy?
I always liked the idea of doing a trilogy with the story, but I wasn't sure that it would actually happen. After I finished writing "The Threshold Child" I went through the traditional method of trying to get it published (sending out letters and sample chapters to literary agents and publishing companies), with no success. I got discouraged and figured that it would never be worth the time to write any more of the series. It wasn't until I published with Amazon and got such a positive response that I decided to continue with the story.

What was the inspiration for the concepts in this book?
When I first began writing "The Threshold Child" it was primarily a story about a young woman who was trying to decide what she believed, which was something I was going through at the time. I worked on the book off and over over the course of nearly a decade, and it slowly evolved into what it is today.

Did it come from any religious aspects in your life?
 This probably isn't a surprise to those who have read my books, but I'm a very religious person. My beliefs color every aspect of my life, and so it is natural that it affects my writing as well. There have been comments on some of the book reviews that my writing is too preachy, but I'd rather write a story that I feel does some good to those who read it as opposed to pretending that my writing and my personal beliefs are separate from each other.

Is Adesina based on yourself? How much would you say you are like her?
 I think that she started out a lot like me, but now we are both very different. The only things that remain from her original personality when I first began writing are her desire to find her place in the world and her longing for family. The former was definitely something I felt when I began writing, and the latter (fortunately) is something I've never had to suffer through.

What would you want your Blood Weapon to be?
 Swords are always awesome, but I don't think I'm aggressive enough for a weapon like that. I think mine would probably be a bow.

Who is your favorite character from the series?
 Ravi. First of all, I've always wanted a giant cat companion (which is why there is one in the books). Second, he is wise and calm and funny and understanding. Who wouldn't want someone like that around? Third, he sings. I love music.

How did you come up with the magic system for your books? 
The original idea came from the fact that I wanted my magic users to draw their power from the world around them. So I started thinking of natural forces that could be manipulated to one's advantage. For example, the manipulation of light can create illusions and the alteration of gravity makes it so one can fly. As I wrote the magic became a bit more complex, but that's the basis of the system.

I like the idea of a dava. Do you believe in soul mates?
 In general, no. I believe that a successful relationship requires work and sacrifice and selfless concern for each other. With those things, almost any two people can be happy together (even if it's hard).

Is there anything you regret now that it's done?
 There are things in the story I would probably alter if I were writing them again, but I don't think I would go back now and do it. I can tell that my writing in "The Threshold Child" is not as skilled as my writing in "The Labyrinth of Destiny," but that is just what comes with experience.

If your books were made into a movie, who would you want to play Adesina? 
I often think about this when I'm watching movies or tv shows. It's a fun game that goes on in my head. My list of possibilities changes all the time, but my current favorite is Bonnie Wright. She's a good age for the role, and I think she'd do a good job. Past favorites have been Stephanie Leonidas, Kate McGrath, and Karen Gillan, but all of them are now too old for the part.

Why did you leave the ending as open as you did?
 I like leaving the future of the story to the imagination of the readers. That's part of what I love about reading books. When the author tries too hard to control what goes on beyond the written story, I get a little grumpy. I want to decide what happens! So, I tried to extend that to my readers.

What is your writing process?
 I usually see a scene in my head, like something out of a movie. That tends to spark the idea for a book. From there I decide what came before the scene and what happens after. Once I get a fairly good idea of what the story is about, then I begin writing. Sometimes I do an outline, sometimes I don't. Sometimes I write in order, sometimes I skip ahead to write something that I find exciting. I tend to let my mood direct my process, which means that sometimes I don't get much written in a week's time. This is a problem when I'm on a deadline. Haha!

What are some of your favorite books?
 One of my very favorite books is "Howl's Moving Castle" by Diana Wynn Jones. It's so witty and creative and visual. I always recommend that book when people ask me for suggestions. I also love "The Chronicles of Narnia" by C.S. Lewis, "Little Women" by Louisa Alcott, "Beauty" by Robin McKinley, and "The Little Prince" by Antione de Saint-Exupery. Those are just a few, but I'm trying to be restrained. Otherwise, I'd name several dozen other books that I love.

What do you have planned for your next project?
 I'm working on a story about a boy (soon to be a man) who is given a magical partisan. He then has to learn to use it and to become the warrior that he feels he needs to be. It's a fun project for me because it's different from what I've written before. The partisan is sentient, and rather stubborn and surly. I'm having a good time writing about the struggles of the boy as he tries to master the willful weapon. I hope to have it finished by next summer, but we'll see if my children cooperate.